Re: The Alien Gallery

>Hi,
> I'm still working on improvements for The Poetry Station, but meanwhile, i
>was wondering if you could critique a site I've been working on. It's a
>graphics collection with an alien theme, and all the graphics are original
>works....
>I'd like some input about it's design, graphics, loading times and the
>such. The URL is
>
>http://www.geocities.com/EnchantedForest/Glade/9591/alienmain.html
>The Alien Gallery
>  Shing Khor

Hello Shing,

        Have a couple nesting errors in the code as in the closing tag for
font is missing in one line (sorry forgot the line) and a few more but not
many.
        As far as load times was smooth and fairly fast.
        Graphics looked good Design per what you appear to want is good.

Now just a suggestion as I to like the Alien Thing and would keep me longer
if something to this effect was inputted into the site. You have a alien
site, you have got some pretty nice doodles of yours on the pages keeping
with the design/pictures you see most often elsewhere. Now IF you had on the
main page a Article or 2 on the topic of Aliens put with your graphics it
would create a further interest to go 1st read on and then deeper into the
site. As it is now I know its your site, I know you where boredom induced to
draw and I know your different names you are called but I know nothing of
the topic Aliens.

Just a thought....

Ben

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