Re: Critique Request: www.antibodywear.com
by "Ryan Fischer" <fischer(at)email.unc.edu>
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Mon, 29 Jun 1998 14:22:02 -0400 |
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"Preston Davis" <hailedav(at)erols.com>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org> |
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Preston Davis wrote:
>May I have the benefit of your collective noodles with a peek at
>www.antibodywear.com ? Specifically, I'm looking at LOAD TIME vs.
>DESIGN. Is it too slow? Is it easy to navigate? Can you understand the
logo's?
Operating system: Win95
Browser: IE4.72
Modem Connection Speed: 33.6KBPS connected at 26.4KBPS
The page loaded surprisingly fast for the number of images it had. I highly
suggest you include some sort of text on the front page (though I recognize
that ou did specify ALT for the linked images. I'd also provide a different
way to navigate the site, possibly some text links at the bottom like so:
[ Enter | What is Antibody? | View Catalog | What's New? ]
Also, you need to put some contact information on the front page. About the
logo? Kind-of blurry if you ask me (if you're referring to the "AB" with
the orbital...).
Personally I like the design of the "enter" page much better than what you
have on the outside. If I were you, I'd do away with the splash page and
make the "enter" page the first page. Load time is quite fast on the
"enter" page as well. Upon a second look, I like the look of the "news"
section best of all (color scheme, etc). That one might be good to use.
Above all, you need a !DOCTYPE declaration (and here I'm referring to the
front page). Remember to validate when you're done!
HTH! ;-)
-Ryan Fischer
ICQ UIN - 595003
fischer(at)email.unc.edu
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