Re: Please help me decide, a Little more than Yes Or No......

-----Original Message-----
From: Craig Harding <guide(at)ao.net>
To: Critique List <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Date: Thursday, September 03, 1998 9:50 PM
Subject: Please help me decide


>Hello fellow members. I've got a little problem. I'm trying to finish up
>a graphic on a client's commercial site. I can't decide which of the two
>Take a look at these two beta sites and let me know what you think and
>which works better.
>http://www.ao.net/~guide/mike/index.html
>http://www.ao.net/~guide/mike/index2.html

Craig,

        You know I do not come out often but when I see you ask I always try
to come out, just do not like the wolves here to much anymore <G>... As for
thoughts on the Graphics personally you have done a lot better before. Do
not know if the Client has said it Must be there or not but if not I would
say start over with a different thought in mind as the CD just don't seem to
fit.

        Alot of Critics with little thought on the What side of it, just
alot of "I do not like"...  You have some soothing music on the site, you
have a key word "Innovative", those bring to mind the word "Inspiration". It
appears your having trouble with a Logo for the site and not just a graphic
representation.

        So IF this is the case and you do not need a specfic graphic then a
suggestion. With the music and the thought of calmness to the site a rough
CD turnning just don't fit. But What if (if you can do) you did a little
effect. Lets use the same CD style, little smaller but put it Upright and
spin it slowly. Not spin as in around like you have it but Rotating around,
then as it is in the Flat/sidewise spot, twinkle it like a star as in the
look you get on index2. Think this would bring the "Inspire" word out......

        (understand not done and did not ask) Your 704 address at bottom
(640x480) runs into the left blue border......

        Later,

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