Re: On Line Law Office Needs Scrutiny
by "Timothy Hubic" <tim.hubic(at)bcgcanada.com>
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"Chris Opfell" <cko(at)primenet.com> |
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Hi Chris,
I like your site... I have a few comments but they are fairly
subjective, so take them for what they are worth....
1) The first page - the text in the scrolling Marquee is too long...... =
it should end after=20
"... it doesn't have to be." then the rest of the text could be a =
static blurb just below
the scrolling line.
2) I don't care for the bottom frame - I like the navigation bar... just =
put it at the bottom of
each page, the frame takes up to much screen area.
3) Below the navigation bar (image) - you should have text links listed.
4) The images (on most of the pages) are very well done.... they come =
off great, though I
think they are a touch to large and overbearing in some cases.... no =
big whoop but I=20
would make them a touch smaller.
5) Maybe on your map page you could put your complete mailing address =
and appropriate
phone (fax) numbers etc. A complete offering of how to contact your =
office.
I think the images you have (created?) and are using are great, very =
clean and professional.
The site already has 'visual impact' without coming off cheesy! Good =
job
If you are new to html or not - I think you have done a real good job! =
Keep it up.
I viewed your pages with Win NT, MSIE 4.01, 17" monitor, 1024 x 768, a =
bunch of colors.
Regards,
Timothy
BCG Canada Inc.
http://www.bcgcanada.com=20
-----Original Message-----
From: Chris Opfell <cko(at)primenet.com>
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: Tuesday, September 22, 1998 10:29 AM
Subject: On Line Law Office Needs Scrutiny
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Hi.
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I'm posting my online law office and would like critiques. It is a =
commercial site.
I'm new to HTML authoring, an although it can be agonizing, the =
results can be very satisfying. I have really enjoyed seeing everyone =
else's work, although I'm not yet sure I'm in the position to critique =
anyone (something about he who has not sinned....). What I really need =
help with is META Tags and Tables. I'd also like to give my Site more =
visual impact. Your comments are most appreciated.
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www.ckomedia.com/ckolaw.htm
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Thank you!
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Chris Opfell
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<DIV><FONT size=3D2>I like your site... I have a few comments but they =
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fairly</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>subjective, so take them for what they are=20
worth....</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT size=3D2>1) The first page - the text in the scrolling =
Marquee is too=20
long...... it should end after </FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2> "... it doesn't have to=20
be." then the rest of the text could be a static blurb =
just=20
below</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2> the scrolling line.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>2) I don't care for the bottom frame - I like the =
navigation=20
bar... just put it at the bottom of</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2> each page, the frame takes up to =
much=20
screen area.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>3) Below the navigation bar (image) - you should =
have text=20
links listed.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>4) The images (on most of the pages) are very well =
done....=20
they come off great, though I</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2> think they are a touch to large =
and=20
overbearing in some cases.... no big whoop but I </FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2> would make them a touch=20
smaller.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>5) Maybe on your map page you could put your =
complete mailing=20
address and appropriate</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2> phone (fax) numbers etc. A =
complete=20
offering of how to contact your office.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>I think the images you have =
(created?) and are=20
using are great, very clean and professional.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT><FONT size=3D2>The site =
already has 'visual=20
impact' without coming off cheesy! Good job</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>If you are new to html or not - I think you have =
done a real=20
good job! Keep it up.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>I viewed your pages with Win NT, MSIE 4.01, 17" =
monitor,=20
1024 x 768, a bunch of colors.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Regards,<BR>Timothy<BR>BCG Canada =
Inc.<BR><A=20
href=3D"http://www.bcgcanada.com">http://www.bcgcanada.com</A> =
</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><B>-----Original =
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</B>Chris Opfell <<A=20
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</B>Tuesday, September 22, 1998 10:29 AM<BR><B>Subject: </B>On Line =
Law=20
Office Needs Scrutiny<BR><BR></DIV></FONT>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Hi.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>I'm posting my online law office =
and would=20
like critiques. It is a commercial site.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>I'm new to HTML authoring, an =
although it=20
can be agonizing, the results can be very satisfying. I have =
really=20
enjoyed seeing everyone else's work, although I'm not yet sure I'm =
in the=20
position to critique anyone (something about he who has not=20
sinned....). What I really need help with is META Tags and=20
Tables. I'd also like to give my Site more visual =
impact. Your=20
comments are most appreciated.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2><FONT=20
color=3D#000000>www</FONT>.ckomedia.com/ckolaw.htm</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Thank you!</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Chris Opfell</FONT></DIV>
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