RE: Site Critique Please

by "Webmaster at WebWham" <webmaster(at)webwham.com>

 Date:  Tue, 8 Dec 1998 19:50:01 -0500
 To:  "Gary S Gustin" <ggustin1(at)tampabay.rr.com>,
<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
 In-Reply-To:  rr
  todo: View Thread, Original
No particular order:

http://www.gate.net/~ccschool/awards/index.html Sarah Lippert image requires
severe colour and gamma correction facial features in dark shadow.. suggest
re-scan and cleanup in a photo editing package.

http://www.gate.net/~ccschool/biblebaffle/index.html 310K image is in need
of some extensive compressing! Even on a cable modem this one took a
while...

http://www.gate.net/%7eccschool/page4.html :
Bible Baffle Championships = Times Roman font, black, white background
Awards Night = Times Roman font, black, white background
Christmas Musicale = Time Roman, blue, paper lattice background
Consistency?


Liked the little emphasis artwork on each page, fits well.

http://www.gate.net/%7eccschool/page6.html 42K image - OUCH!

http://www.gate.net/%7eccschool/PulhamBrown.html (and all teacher's pages
except): http://www.gate.net/%7eccschool/Swift.html Marquee is not HTML
standard.. only works in IE

http://www.gate.net/%7eccschool/Swift.html image is very fuzzy and out of
focus (my rule as a Professional Photographer - not sharp = leave it out).
Page background colour on this one does not retain a standard with all the
other Teacher's background  pages.

http://www.gate.net/%7eccschool/eagleeye.html 62K image splash - OUCH! OUCH!
Loose the shadow effect on "The Eagle's Eye", it looks hand drawn in parts,
and sloppy. Reduce this image as well.. 28.8K people will be hurtin' on this
site.

All Nav buttons in the gradient boxes require the text to be cleaned up as
it appears fuzzy against the background (check your anti-alias on the text).
Try it on and off to see what looks better. Try a more forgiving font...
Verdana maybe?


Overall, great effort, remember to META tag with keywords and descripts
before submitting to the search engines..




Gil Tennant
Webmaster at WebWham
http://www.webwham.com
Creating Web Sites with IMPACT!

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org]On
Behalf Of Gary S Gustin
Sent: December 8, 1998 5:43 PM
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
Subject: Site Critique Please


As a relatively new member would someone be kind enough to
critique the following site for myself and the students
helping me with the site?

The site is entitled "Community Christian School" and is a
site for the small non-denominational Christian school in
Largo, Florida.

The URL is: http://www.gate.net/~ccschool/


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Gary S Gustin
Largo, Florida

"Lightning Strikes"
http://home.tampabay.rr.com/gsgustin

"Community Christian School"
http://www.gate.net/~ccschool/

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