Re: Please critique my site

by "Katsuey(at)katsuey.com" <katsuey(at)katsuey.com>

 Date:  Tue, 7 Dec 1999 02:29:50 -0600
 To:  <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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> The address is http://www.whambajuice.com

Hi Debbie,
It's a nice site.  It looks suspiciously like a theme though.  If
you did use a theme, I'd suggest you steer clear in the future,
since most have that "theme" look to them unless you do a lot of
alterations.  Bits and pieces of themes work best IMHO.

If it's not a theme, lets do something to make it look a bit less
"theme" like.  Understand, there is nothing wrong with using a
theme and looking as such, but it just detracts from being a
professional site.  However, since you just did it for a friend,
they should be pleased because it's clean and clear.

I would like to see just a tad more graphics.  Can you find some
nice pictures of either the actual drinks or people drinking
juice and looking pleased about it?  Again, it's merely "spice"
that I am suggesting.  I like the little strawberry drawing and I
thing the overall look of the site is very compatible with a
beverage product.

Good work.
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