Re: Please critique

by "Toller" <toller(at)ntlworld.com>

Date:	Tue, 20 Jun 2000 18:05:47 +0100
To:	"David Pippen" <gadale(at)earthlink.net>, "hwg-critique" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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Dear David,

I am sorry but I find this page very confusing!
Is this a church site or a commercial one? It looks like a commercial site
so why does it mention a church?
I also find this number of very bright colours alarming - somehow there is
nothing to latch on to, to help me feel safe and secure, so I am afraid that
it would actually put me off buying anything.... ;)

In your coding, might I suggest you add an alt attribute and dimensions for
the computer graphic? It would also help if you could attend to the messy
code (and remove all the unnecessary junk) produced by Front Page (see
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.georgia-dale-specialty.co
m%2Fclients%2Fnopc.html) .

Cheers,

Jenny

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