Web design site critique

Well, I got a couple of responses from my request the other day (below). Any
other takers? Please?

> Well, here we go. Just getting my feet wet in this business, so here's my
> preliminary web site. Still toying with the little details - business
plan,
> financing, etc. ;-)  meanwhile I'm trying to get a feel for my "look".
It's
> lacking excitement right now, I know, so if you have suggestions, I'd
> appreciate them. Please - don't just say something's awful, tell me what
you
> think would make it better!
> Thanks muchly - here's the URL - http://www.mts.net/~nsv/essential
> --
> Natalie Verge
> Talk to me:  mailto:nsv(at)mb.sympatico.ca
> Visit me:  http://members.tripod.com/~nsv
> For Professional Web Design:  http://www.mts.net/~nsv/essential

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