Re: Redesign on Martyrs Site

Hello Susan,

First my equipment,
Browser    : NN 4.61 [en]
JavaScript : On
Cookies    : On
Browser    : IE5
JavaScript : On
Cookies    : On
Line Speed : 28.8
Platform   : Windows 98
Screen size: 17 inch
Resolution : 1024X768
Color depth: High color (16 bit)


I just love the martyrslogo.jpg image.

The "S" of sometimes is really badly positioned. At first it took me
some time before I saw the "S" because it wasn't on the main page. I
thought that you had mistyped some words. "ometimes" looks just a bit
too odd by itself.

You have two meta keywords tags. Do the keywords tags really have to be
with both attributes, name and http-equiv. Don't you thing that only
"name" would do it. Anyway, never seen the keywords used with http-equiv
before.

The buttons become a bit hard to read while onmouseover. Please change
it, I think that someone made this comment before me too.

The overall design concept is OK. Keep up the good work


Best wishes,
Lauri V�in
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----- Original Message -----
From: Susan Vollmer <susanvollmer(at)hotmail.com>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: 10. juuli 2000. a. 3:09
Subject: Redesign on Martyrs Site


> If you have time, I would appreciate any comments on a possible
redesign of
> my site.  The new look I'm experimenting with is at:
>
>     http://www.fallenmartyrs.com/indexnew.htm
>
>
> When you click on any of the links, it will take you to my current
site,
> which none of the pages will match this new home page.  I'm looking
for
> feedback on this possible new look.  Once I have it down, I will need
to
> modify the other pages.

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