Re: commercial re-check please http://www.designersatwork.com

Ok, so this time I did go through the entire site.... NICE! I love the
rollover on the index page.

But, there are a couple of things I noticed. I went to the Flash Test page.
Loved the music, but unfortunately for someone on a 56k modem, the song
takes awhile to download, and in the meantime is pausing during it. I know
you can use javascript to have it start when the page loads completely, but
I'm not sure about the embedding as I have never used music on any of my
pages. I'll take a look in some of my books later on and see what they say.

Also, you still have that 'td height="100%" ' code at the very end of all
your pages. Again, try doing 5 or taking out the row. You could also take
out the height attribute and put your onepixel.gif in there. Make it the
width of the table, with its height set to about 5 or so.

On your portfolio page, you might want to consider having the information
about the projects next to the pictures. Use the align attribute for the
picture to make it work. An example of this can be found at
http://jaminiche.freeservers.com/. That way you don't have to put the (Below
Left) & (Above Right) in your text. You can keep the last six pictures in
the table, they look fine. At the bottom where you have "If my work
interests you," put a dash in E-mail and a period after it to complete the
sentence.

Other than that, the site looks great! Hope this helps.

Jami of TX

----- Original Message -----
From: "charles daly" <etype(at)home.com>
To: "crit" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Saturday, March 03, 2001 4:52 PM
Subject: commercial re-check please http://www.designersatwork.com


> I really need to thank so many people who responded with great
> suggestions. Especially Jersey City Bev who taught me so much. I've
> streamlined the site quite a bit and I'd appreciate crits. esp. re:
> navigating ease/difficulty, browser resolution clarity and download
> times. It's an interior design site so has graphics -I crunched them and
> hope I didn't crunch away too much detail.
> http://www.designersatwork.com
> I'm still not getting any submissions, neither digest nor daily
> versions. I only get the odd crit. of other's sites which is why I
> haven't offered any suggestions to anyone. Just not getting them!
> Charles
>

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