Re: A little disappointed:(

by "Katsuey(at)katsuey.com" <katsuey(at)katsuey.com>

Date:	Sat, 30 Oct 1999 21:34:39 -0400
To:	<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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> About 2-3 weeks ago I asked you to please take a look at a site that I
> have been working on. I did not get one critique from anybody on this
> site. >>>>>>>>

Didn't have a thing to do with content.  My mama always told me not to say
anything if I didn't have anything good to say.  But you insist on having a
critique so here goes:

If I opened to you site, I would move one fast.  Why?  Because of the $
signs all over and overall first impression.  It "smells" to me like a
personal home page of a used car salesman.  It does not have a professional
feel to it and it has the feel of "cheap" with the glitz.  You have not made
me believe that you now what you are talking about and that your site is
anything but the hype of a small timer.  The overall feel of the text is
that it was written by a young person who thinks hype sells.  With me it
doesn't.

Please do not now trounce out and think me rude, I've given you my honest
opinion.  Anything else that you would like to know?
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