critique

I'd like to hear some criticism on the following two sites, if anyone has
the
time to check them out:

http://versuche.org/
http://erslah.com/senegal/

Be sure to let me know if you encounter any errors or if you have any other
suggestions.  Thanks in advance.

--Eric S.

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