Re: www.johnnyclegg.com

Hi Andy,

Nice site, but you are not finished yet! Now it's time for some polish!

Here are a few things I noticed (maybe someone else will submit others), and
I'll list them numerically:

1. All pages besides the home page need links. I didn't have any trouble
finding the links on the home page as Laura did, they were pretty obvious to
me because of the arrow images.

2. The fonts "Ariel," and "Tahoma" are mixed. Use one or the other in text
blocks. Using a different font in a bolded heading for clarity is O.K.

3. The font "Tahoma," is not native to Mac. I would use "Verdana" instead,
because it is, and it is similar to "Tahoma."

4. Really liked the Flash "changing face," and "Timeline." Be sure to
include the "next" arrow on all the "Timeline" pages.

5. On the "Albums" page: There is a link that reads: "Click here for a full
discography." "Click here" should be underlined to make it easier for
viewers to understand it is a link. Once clicked on, the page should open a
new window by using TARGET="_blank" code in your link tag.

6. On the "Pictures" page, lose the table border.

7. At the bottom of the home page, you have the statement:

"Note: if any copyright is infringed by the use of any materials on this
site, please notify the webmaster immediately by clicking here and any such
materials will be removed from the site."

Lose that statement. It sounds like an admission of guilt, rather than a
considerate gesture.

HTH,
Lauren



----- Original Message -----
From: "Andy Innes" <innax(at)icon.co.za>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Monday, October 29, 2001 7:16 AM
Subject: crit: www.johnnyclegg.com


> Hi all
>
> I haven't asked for a crit here for a while.
>
> We finished a site about a month ago which we think looks okay in MSIE and
> Netscape 6 on PC.
>
> We have noticed a fairly high concentration of Mac and Netscape users for
> here (South Africa) due mainly to the international content and appeal.
>
> Would you be so good as to critique http://www.johnnyclegg.com ? All OS's,
> screen res, browsers, etc. appreciated.
>
> Thanks in advance
>
> Andy Innes
>
> http://www.bluweb.co.za
>
>

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