Request Critique of my web Pages - Commercial

Dear List Members:
I have just joined this list in order to take advantage of the wonderful
opportunity to have my pages critiqued. This is of great value to me and I
appreciate your taking the time to do this. I have started a web design
business called Hawk Vision and my web page can be found at
http://www.hawk-vision.com. I have done one other page for the Zen Center of
Hawaii which is at http://www.zencenterhawaii.org.
Thank you and Aloha from Hawaii

Robert Althouse
Hawk Vision

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