Re: Critique Request

Hi Helen

I had a look at your site and it looks very attractive.  The graphics loaded
quickly and smoothly, and the fishing theme was beautifully carried throughout
the site, including the really nice touch with the navigation.

The text was clear and readable, but it doesn't really tell you any more than a
slide-show presentation would, or, as you say, a brochure.  If I was visiting
with advertising needs in mind I'd want to see links to some sample advertising,
references, enquiry or feedback form.  The navigation was easy, but might I
suggest that having to keep going back to the home page if you don't want to go
through the site in the order selected is a little annoying.

Great looking site though.

i was viewing on IE 4 at 1024x768.

Cheers
Debbi Stott

-----Original Message-----
From: Helen Savage-Olsen <helen(at)lewisad.com>
To: . <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: 16 September 1999 23:56
Subject: Critique Request


>I would really appreciate it if someone would have a bash at our
>company's first web site.
><URL:http://www.lewiscommunications.to/>
>Simple as it is I'd be interested in how readable you find the text...
>the speed of the animations...
>the brochure-like navigation....
>what you might want to see that you don't...
>
>Any comments will be greatly appreciated. Thank you - H Savage-Olsen,
>helen(at)lewisad.com
>
>

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