RE Looking for critique on site http://lfesavr.hypermart.net - Thank you in advance.
by "Kirkham" <kirkham(at)uq.net.au>
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You want honest opinions so here is mine.
I use IE4 1024x768 3.36
Firstly this annoying little box of hypermart keep popping up in my face =
and I had trouble reading info on the screen until I closed the box.
You have broken links on the home page to projects.html also webhosting.
Other links to webhosting are also broken.
I found the different background on each page confusing and was not sure =
if I was still in your site or had moved to another.
While your home page was loading yellow text was displayed on the white =
background until the background loaded. If you turned the background to =
a dark colour eg dark blue at least the page text could be read while =
the images were loading.
Hope you find these suggestions helpful.
Nerida
-----Original Message-----
I wish to offer a site for critique. I am looking for honest opinions =
so I might perfect my work. =20
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There are known issues:
a.. There is a down-link I know if is to "Adgrafix" (web hosting-my =
file is messed up).=20
b.. Also there is a "Script error" caused by text that is added by =
the host, www.hypermart.net (this error is only found in IE 4.01 =
strangely).
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I look forward to these opinions as I am trying to be considered for =
area jobs that require "web-work" (E.I. provincial (Ontario - Canada) =
position for webmaster.). The site is to sell myself to potential =
employers and for contracts.
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Once again thank you for your help, here is the addy to be "ripped =
apart"
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http://lfesavr.hypermart.net
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Thank you in advance,
Sean O'Toole
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<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>You want honest opinions so here is=20
mine.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>I use IE4 1024x768 3.36</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Firstly this annoying little box of =
hypermart=20
keep popping up in my face and I had trouble reading info on the screen=20
until I closed the box.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT><FONT size=3D2>You have =
broken links on the=20
home page to projects.html also webhosting.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Other links to webhosting are also =
broken.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>I found the =
different=20
background on each page confusing and was not sure if I was still in =
your site=20
or had moved to another.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT><FONT size=3D2>While your =
home page=20
was loading yellow text was displayed on the white background until the=20
background loaded. If you turned the background to a dark colour eg dark =
blue at=20
least the page text could be read while the images were =
loading.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Hope you find =
these=20
suggestions helpful.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Nerida</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><B>-----Original =
Message-----</B><BR></DIV></FONT>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>I wish to offer a site for =
critique. I am=20
looking for honest opinions so I might perfect my work. =
</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>There are known issues:</FONT></DIV>
<UL>
<LI><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>There is a down-link I know if is =
to=20
"Adgrafix" (web hosting-my file is messed up). </FONT>
<LI><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Also there is a "Script =
error"=20
caused by text that is added by the host, <A=20
href=3D"http://www.hypermart.net">www.hypermart.net</A> (this error =
is only=20
found in IE 4.01 strangely).</FONT></LI></UL>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>I look forward to these opinions as =
I am trying=20
to be considered for area jobs that require "web-work" (E.I.=20
provincial (Ontario - Canada) position for webmaster.). The site =
is to=20
sell myself to potential employers and for contracts.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2>Once again thank you for your help, =
here is the=20
addy to be "ripped apart"</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=3D#000000 size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2><A=20
href=3D"http://lfesavr.hypermart.net">http://lfesavr.hypermart.net</A></F=
ONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2></FONT> </DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Thank you in advance,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT size=3D2>Sean O'Toole</FONT></DIV></BODY></HTML>
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