Re: New Home

by "Susan Lewis" <slewis(at)networkone.net>

 Date:  Tue, 30 Mar 1999 11:03:24 -0800
 To:  <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
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Hi Carol,


I finally found some time and took a look at your website
http://www.cbwdesign.com.  I'm using MSIE 4.0, 640x480, 17 inch screen and
33.6 modem speed.

I was immediately impressed with the speed that your site loaded.  Also,
while I don't advocate splash pages myself, you did provide a comprehensive
navigational list and your graphic loaded fast enough that I was not
"compelled" to click away.

On your portfolio page, I note that you don't have any of your graphics
showing up.  Did you forget to post them on your server?  <VBG>  Also, have
you thought of providing a link to your clients' websites so visitors can go
and take a look?  You could do this by bringing up a new screen and thus not
"lose" your viewer while they take a look.

Your Paint Shop Pro page is nicely done; likewise the Tutorial page.  Some
nice choices on your books.

I have just one tiny "complaint" and that has to do with your choice of
words in Item #4 under "Advil".  Being a graphic designer myself, I cringe
when I see any suggestion about "stealing" graphics.  Perhaps you could come
up with another word?  Maybe "...found some free graphics to place on ...
blah blah blah".

Anyhoo -- I did enjoy wandering through your pages.  All are nicely done
with lots of space which makes them easy to read.

Good luck!

Susan E. Lewis
Full Circle Associates
http://fullcircleassociates.simplenet.com
Place the "full circle" of your web and
graphics designs in our capable hands.

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