Re: Please critique http://www.toddbreer.com

Todd,

Overall, I think you have succeeded in creating an elegant, professional
looking site.

I only have a couple of comments:

First, I would expect a major link off the main page to be more then a
mailto: email link.  With your "about" and "Resume" pages alreay posted, I
don't think the "Contact" page is likely to add any new information.

Second,  that photo you are using is a tease and it bothers me.  First, you
have a picture of yourself on every page, so from that I would think that
you want us to know what you look like.  But the picture is so fuzzy, we
can't really see what you look like.  So it gives me an uneasy feeling, like
you're very shy but secretly an exhibitionist, maybe.  Well, that was a poor
attempt at humor.  Anyway, I would use a photo that's not quite so fuzzy.

I do like the site very much, especially the graphics you've made from the
text at the tops of the pages and the overall layout.  Afraid I don't have
any older browsers handy...

Cheers,
Kim


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   Kimberley Mitchell                           (732) 750-1941
   Member: HTML Writers Guild        kim(at)mighty-sites.com
   Mighty Sites Web Design               http://www.mighty-sites.com
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----- Original Message -----
From: Todd Breer <tlbreer(at)hotmail.com>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Friday, October 22, 1999 12:29 PM
Subject: Please critique http://www.toddbreer.com


> Please critique www.toddbreer.com
>
> I'm am interested in all comments.  I'd also like to know how it looks in
> older browsers.  I only have IE 5.0 and the newest NN.
>
> TIA!
> ------------------------------------------------------------
> Todd Breer
> E-mail me at:        todd(at)toddbreer.com
> My homepage:     http://www.toddbreer.com
> Kirksville Net:      http://www.kirksville.net
> Fax me at:           1-530-884-5254
>

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