Re: Two sites

Hi

System: W95, 15"mon, Netscape 4, 800x600

Brothers site:

I like the fact that you've kept a consistency throughout the site, I think
thats important for a web site.
It loaded quickly - due of course to the fact there was no images apart from
the background.
I'd put the personal info on a separate page rather than the first page.
I usually hate backgrounds with images, but I think this one suits the site,
and you can read the text ok, however I'd probably add some images instead
and keep the background plain - but thats just a personal preference.
The content of the site is good - very important for a web page.
The only thing you might want to rethink is the navigation.  the rule is
that you should never be more than two clicks away from a page, so putting
links on all the pages to all the sections is a really good idea so that
people don't have to keep coming back to the first page.

Your site:

I also liked that you've kept everything consistent.  It loads quickly and
you've taken into account that someone could be viewing at 640x480.  good
work.

I think that if you pursue if further you could have a promising career in
web design.  good luck!

Tracey

work
http://www.zivo.com

play
http://www.users.fl.net.au/~paq/webdesign/

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