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First page: I would really like to see more color on the front page and be swept off my feet by an exquisite piece that shows off your product. Your text says that you like to see the sparkle of stones and metals, but there is no imagery to support that phrase. Looking at the Products page, looking for the beauty of your products, I can easily navigate (good) but the pictures don't seem to show off your product to its best advantage. The backgrounds are light and neutral, and the jewelry looks ordinary. Even taking a lesson from print ads, I would try to photograph jewelry in bright light against a dark background to make it sparkle. All in all, I think your site is orderly and easy to navigate, but needs more sparkle to present the product in its best light. Just my opinion and best of luck! Kin ==================================================== Kimberley Mitchell (732) 750-1941 Member: HTML Writers Guild kim(at)mighty-sites.com Mighty Sites Web Design http://www.mighty-sites.com ==================================================== ----- Original Message ----- From: Carrie <carrie(at)cefwebdesign.com> To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org> Sent: Wednesday, November 24, 1999 6:25 PM Subject: Over 30 Enterprises > Could you please take a look at: http://www.over30enterprise.com/ > > Thanks, > Carrie. > >
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