Re: Request for critique

by "Jayne" <Jayne(at)skyline-design.com>

 Date:  Wed, 23 Apr 2003 10:02:03 -0700
 To:  "Michael Schlossman" <schloss(at)comcast.net>,
<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
 References:  comcast
  todo: View Thread, Original
Hi Michael,
IE 6.0 - 1024 x 768 - DSL

Very sharp looking site -- Loads fast - Clear crisp graphics.
Love the Logo - and the sticky note.

I would rethink the purple color on the roll over links. (IMO)
Really like the way you spaced the bottom address and copywrite info.

Must you have the W3C - Bobby images/links? Was this required for the class?
If not, I'd remove them. Yikes! they are on every page...

If this was (is) a real site, I'd add a portfolio section, or more pics in
the Graphic design section. If I was going to hire you, I'd want to see more
of your work ;)

Overall, very clean design.
Good Job!
Best Regards,
Jayne
Skyline Design

----- Original Message -----
From: "Michael Schlossman" <schloss(at)comcast.net>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Wednesday, April 23, 2003 7:17 AM
Subject: Request for critique


> I am a student in the Guild's HTML II class. I would like a critique of
the
> following site.
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> http://mywebpages.comcast.net/schloss/neue
>
> Thank you,
> Michael Schlossman
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