Commercial Critique: NuTrend Homes

by simone(at)genesisnetwork.net (Demitrius)

 Date:  Thu, 18 Dec 1997 16:20:33 -0800
 To:  "HWG Critique" <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
  todo: View Thread, Original
Fellow Guild Members,

Please critique a new commercial website I've created. Actually, I created
this over 4 months ago. We've been waiting for a domain name issue to clear
up. So I hesitate to submit this to you, as I would have done it much
differently now.

The purpose of this site is to generate sales leads for a local manufactured
home dealer.

I am most interested in reading your opinions on the navigation. The overall
look is going to be changed in the months to come.

Please tell me:
1) Your O/S, modem, screen, res, browser.
2) Download times.
3) Navigation. Easy? Not?
4) Content. If you were in the market, would this site spark your curiosity
about this brand of homes?
5) Form questions. Too personal? Just right?
6) What would you do different?

I always get really good feedback from this group (thanks!) but so many of
you only send your comments to me and not the list. Why? So many could
benefit from your insights. Yes, even yours! Please click on "Reply to All"
in your mail program so that everyone can read your input.

URL:  http://www.nutrendhomes.com

Again, remember I did this several months ago; so simplistic was I in my
youth!  :-P
Thanks in advance.

Regards,
Demitrius >I<
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