Critique of Proposed Web Design and Hosting Site

by "Phillip M. Strickland" <pstrickland(at)coastalnet.com>

 Date:  Sun, 28 Dec 1997 21:55:34 -0500
 To:  <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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Season's Greeting fellow HWG members.  I have put together a proposed site
for a web design and hosting company that I plan to start.  Not as a means
of living off of the income, but as a means of gaining further experience in
the design of web sites and marketing them.  For now I have loaded the pages
on my ISP's server for critique purposes.  I plan to move them to another
host's server later this week.  I will also have my own domain.

I would like for you to check the general feel of the site.  Is it too
boring?  I tried to make it straight to the point and without a bunch of
graphics.  I plan to re-design the splash page often incorporating other
ideas into the site, but just want to get it up and running for now.

Anyone got any suggestions for a banner on the splash page, the one there is
just a generic one?

The "Client", "Personal", "Portfolio", "Rates" and "Links" pages aren't
complete but the others are.  Let me know how it looks and any  suggestions
you may have.  Thanks in advance for your time!

The URL is:  http://www2.coastalnet.com/~y8r3g7rm/index2.html

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Phillip M. Strickland          pstrickland(at)coastalnet.com
         http://www2.coastalnet.com/~y8r3g7rm
             Member of the HTML Writer's Guild
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