Re: One more time!

by simone(at)genesisnetwork.net (Demitrius)

Date:	Fri, 6 Feb 1998 10:10:42 -0800
To:	<wahikan(at)pipeline.com>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
	todo: View Thread, Original

Hi Scott,

Site critiqued:  http://www.info-way.com/temp/gtindustries/
Viewed with a P133, 28.8, 640x480, MSIE 4.0

Nice layout. Original. If it were me, however, I'd put the company info &
logo at the bottom, not the top and instead feature a nice graphic about the
product line up top.

You JS worked just fine in my browser.

I hope you're planning on creating a forms based page for "Feedback", right?
Mail links drastically cut down the number of responses you will get. For
every one that comes to you now, 5 to 10 more will not. I know this from
experience with many websites.

How about some before and after shots of the products in action? How about
some testimonials with the customer's smiling face next to it? Do you offer
a money-back guarantee? How does this product compare to its competition in
a side by side test? These are all selling points that would make for a more
compelling pitch.

Overall, a great start.

Regards,
Demitrius >I<
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