Re: Please tell me what you guys think!

Hi Mike,

Site critiqued: http://www.crowngolf.com
Viewed with a P133, 28.8, 640x480, MSIE 4.0

It's a good start. Just a few things I would tinker with, though.

This is a minor point, but your drop shadows are set inconsistently. The
shadow on the CGC3.jpg golf ball is falling down and to the right. But the
drop shadow is set up and to the left. Then right below that, your cgm.GIF
image has the drop shadow down and to the left. You got 3 different lighting
angles going on, not very natural. If you set all drop shadows to the same
angle, it looks much more convincing.

Your page scrolls at 640 res. I see that's because you're trying to fit both
the Us.JPG, Services.JPG and Entrance2.JPG side by side. Together they're
too wide to fit in a 640 screen. I would either reduce the pixel size of the
Entrance2.JPG or redo the layout so that these images are not side by side.

By the way, your CGC3.jpg, Us.JPG and Services.JPG all should have been
saved as a GIF, not JPEG. This is why you're seeing a color shift between
all these and the background, which was saved as a GIF. You did a very nice
job of customizing the stock images from Digital Style's WebSuite.

On the Range.htm page, you are once again positioning two images side by
side and it's causing the page to scroll. Try changing the layout so this
doesn't happen.

I see this happening on several pages.

Hey, I like your shopping cart. Are you having good service with Americart?
http://www.cartserver.com/americart/  I don't know anybody who has used
them, but I have seen their website before. Cleaver concept.

As I said, a good start. Just some minor tweaking, IMO will make it better.

Regards,
Demitrius >I<
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