Re: CRITIQUE: The Casual Snapper

by simone(at)genesisnetwork.net (Demitrius)

 Date:  Sun, 8 Feb 1998 18:24:11 -0800
 To:  "f u s i o n" <brianj(at)ais.ais-gwd.com>
 Cc:  <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
  todo: View Thread, Original
Hey Brian,

Site critiqued: http://www.ais-gwd.com/~fusion/pisgah.html
Viewed with a P133, 28.8, 640x480, MSIE 4.0

Well well, my friend, you've delivered an inspiring new site. Fresh.
Inviting. Compelling.  I'm going to nominate it to "Cool Site of the Day"
and "Project Cool". No kidding.

> [1] Browser, Resolution, O/S, Connection, Display Size
See above.

> [2] HTML
No time to look, sorry.

> [3] Graphics, Color, Layout, Navigation
Excellent on all counts. I especially liked the navigation icons in the
gallery.

One note, and I'm sure this has been pointed out,
http://www.ais-gwd.com/~fusion/click/geese.html
This page doesn't have a background color. Oops.

> [4] Did you enjoy the site?
Yes.

> [5] If I added more images, would you return?
Yep. Why not add URLMinder (http://www.netmind.com/ ) so that visitors can
sign up and be notified for free when you do update the site?

> [6] Too much content? Too little? Was the content boring?
No. No. No.

> [7] Too many images? Too little?
You could add more.

> [8] If you could change 3 things, what would they be?
World peace, world hunger and the price of tea in China. =) But nothing on
your site.

> [9] What did you hate most? What did you like most?
Nothing. Everything.

Splendid job, buddy. You inspire me. Hey, and I'm serious about this, why
don't you sell your work off the website? I'm sure you'd have some takers.
Sign them and number them. People always feel it's worth more money that
way. Well, *some* people anyway.

Regards,
Demitrius >I<
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