Re: Critique it again pls

by "bmccune" <bmccune(at)ix.netcom.com>

 Date:  Wed, 25 Feb 1998 20:02:26 -0600
 To:  "Robert" <tazrox(at)rocketmail.com>,
<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
  todo: View Thread, Original
>I have changed my page to conform to all of you comments but there is
>still one thing I am not sure what to do about.  Under the Sr. High
>page, what should I do with the nav bar?  give me some ideas pls.
>http://members.tripod.com/~C_H_S_M   Thank you.

    I have only a few hints from this end, some may not agree some may but
in the end it is always up to you.

    1) It all loads great, fast, clean and good on the loading. The main
page, Title Off to the right too far, cannot make it all out w/o a scroll.
Same for the address below it but you can read all, just off to the right.

    2) Can you do away with the Pop-up and make it a banner or something
instead?

    3) Do (in my thoughts) away with the Nav bar at bottom, not needed,
Install a return menu with script or tables in the doc itself. Would
eliminate the frame and the scrolling around. But at ant rate install
Returns on the pages....

    4) On the Main Page. I would just put a Little of what/who or something
you are about. Understand one could tell its a Christian site but a little
info on the start would be nice.

    5) No E-Mail Returns????

    6) No Doc Type????

    Thats all I find, as said all appears ok on this end, just minor tweaks
from this point.

233mhz
IE 4.0
33.6
640x480

Ben

Dragon Works
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Ben McCune
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