Re: First Commerical Site (request critique)
by "bmccune" <bmccune(at)ix.netcom.com>
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Sun, 1 Mar 1998 10:52:05 -0600 |
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<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>,
"Jim Imes" <jimes(at)primenet.com> |
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>The URL is: http://www.primenet.com/~dsrtwide/index.html=20
Hello,
Not bad for a 1st but when I got there I felt after looking =
at it something was missing. So I looked awhile trying to figure out =
what it was I was looking for and it came to me, just a personal note =
but you might think of something along this line to beef it up.
1) I was left as said looking. What if you keep it the way it is =
and going with the title you found a Cactus, nice one, desert scene and =
mounted it on the left with text going down the right?? Would catch the =
eye, would make me want to read a little more than just plain text...
2) What if you took the links you have, Buttoned them in a row =
instead of just a text link you had more of a Business Button Style??
3) If I where a Business owner I would want my Firm Name, =
Address, Phone Number, E-Mail, Url link ALL Typed out Somewhere, =
Centered and Bold for all to see...
" Just a few of my own personal Inputs, taste is always hard =
to critique as yours, mine and others will never agree..."
Dragon Works Web Design
E-Mail: dragonwk(at)ix.netcom.com
URL: http://pw1.netcom.com/~bmccune/index.html
Ben McCune
E-Mail: bmccune(at)ix.netcom.com
"Atop the Dragon's Wings he rode, Atop those strudy wings of Old"
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was I was=20
looking for and it came to me, just a personal note but you might think =
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something along this line to beef it up.</FONT></FONT></DIV>
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size=3D2> <FONT=20
size=3D3>1) I was left as said looking. What if you keep it the way it =
is and=20
going with the title you found a Cactus, nice one, desert scene and =
mounted it=20
on the left with text going down the right?? Would catch the eye, would =
make me=20
want to read a little more than just plain text...</FONT></FONT></DIV>
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size=3D3></FONT></FONT> </DIV>
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size=3D3>2) What if you took the links you have, Buttoned them in a row =
instead of=20
just a text link you had more of a Business Button =
Style??</FONT></FONT></DIV>
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size=3D3></FONT></FONT> </DIV>
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size=3D2> <FONT=20
size=3D3>3) If I where a Business owner I would want my Firm Name, =
Address, Phone=20
Number, E-Mail, Url link ALL Typed out Somewhere, Centered and Bold for =
all to=20
see...</FONT></FONT></DIV>
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<DIV align=3Dcenter><FONT color=3D#000000=20
size=3D2> =20
<STRONG>"</STRONG> <FONT size=3D3>Just a few of my own personal =
Inputs, taste=20
is always hard to critique as yours, mine and others will never=20
agree..."</FONT></FONT></DIV>
<DIV> </DIV>
<DIV align=3Dcenter><FONT color=3D#000000><STRONG><FONT size=3D3>Dragon =
Works Web=20
Design<BR>E-Mail: <A=20
href=3D"mailto:dragonwk(at)ix.netcom.com">dragonwk(at)ix.netcom.com</A><BR>URL:=
<A=20
href=3D"http://pw1.netcom.com/~bmccune/index.html">http://pw1.netcom.com/=
~bmccune/index.html</A><BR>Ben=20
McCune<BR>E-Mail: <A=20
href=3D"mailto:bmccune(at)ix.netcom.com">bmccune(at)ix.netcom.com</A><BR>"=
Atop the=20
Dragon's Wings he rode, Atop those strudy wings of =
Old"</FONT></FONT><FONT=20
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