Re: Critique of NPO - Fencing New Brunswick
by "Mike Jewell" <mjewell(at)mojsoft.demon.co.uk>
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Sun, 11 Oct 1998 22:48:22 +0100 |
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<flynn(at)fwds.com>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org> |
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Very nice page - well done! A couple of niggles (and suggestions :-),
though:
- The two vertical stripes ( | | ) down the circular pictures that appear
when you move over a link aren't always in the same place - I know this is
very picky :-)
- It may be a good idea to have the icons closer together so that the
original picture with the two fencers doesn't reappear when you move from
one to another - when a picture flickers it tends to give you a headache
after a while :-)
- I had to scroll down to see the Copyright messages - could you put them to
the right of the 'kudos' icon?
- Suggestion time - could you use JavaScript/Java to do a transitional
effect from one picture to another? I think a wipe or dissolve would work
perfectly with them. I'm afraid I've got no idea of how to do it (a fade is
hard enough for me :-) but I think it would fit in excellently on your page.
Very nice background - I really like the side-bar text.
IE4, Win 95, 800x600,16bit.
Cheers,
/\/\ike
>I took some suggestions of the last critique I had requested and made
>some changes to the layout of this test front page. I would really
>appreciate it if you could revisit and recrit the page.
>http://www.fwds.com/testarea/FNBbeta2/
>Again, let me know how you fare with d'load time, colours, etc. and
>letting me know your viewing setup (OS, browser, res etc) would be
>beneficial too.
>By the way - because it is a test page - none of the links are
>attached.
>Thanks much,
>Isil Flynn
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