Critique please

by Klskljafjj(at)aol.com

Date:	Mon, 11 Mar 2002 02:32:25 EST
To:	<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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I would really appreciate a critique of this site that im making. Located at: http://pegasus.cc.ucf.edu/~saj28809/index.htm

This is my first attempt at making a comercial web page and am attempting to learn the ins and outs so any and all comments are greatly apreciated. Thanks.
<grammar + spelling errors will be fixed once I have the design down ;)>

Thanks in advance

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