Re: please review my commercial site

Re: http://www.angelfire.com/biz/possibilities

1.  The quality of the title image is not very attractive.  You might 
want to re-do the image with anti-alias turned on, if available on your 
graphics program.  I'd also recommend making the white color 
transparent, or frame it, or drop a shadow, etc.  

2.  By using the attribute width="90%" in the <img> tag, you are 
allowing the browser to adjust the image to fit the screen.  Keep in 
mind that some viewer would be using 1600 or higher resolution, and your 
image would be expanded quite a bit.  Make sure the image resolution is 
good enough.  Otherwise, the viewers might be able to count the pixels.

3.  Link text is set to "#238E68".  First of all, that color is hard to 
read on the textured background.  Secondly, that color is not a web safe 
color.  I'd recommend using a darker green.

4.  The first "[" of the link list was not set to the same size and 
color.

5.  Be consistent when referring to you/your company.  In Seeing is 
Believing, you referred you/your company as "we've".  In Prices & 
Services, you mentioned "I am happy to assist.."  In Possibilities' 
Bookstore, you did that within the same paragraph (in the intro para).

6.  The link to United With Christ is broken.

7.  In Seeing is Believing, is the phrase "IN PROGRESS" apply to 
Mlynarski & Cawley, or every thing under that phrase?  Again, try to 
group information clearer.

8.  Be aware that by increasing the font size within a paragraph for a 
few words would skew the consistency of the row height of the paragraph, 
which makes it look irregular.  See the paragraphs in Seeing and 
Believing.

9.  Regarding Prices & Services, I suggest grouping the price with the 
description a little clearer.  One might misread the price for 6 to 10 
pages to be 500 dollars.


-Collin


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