Re: please review my commercial site
by "Collin Lim" <collinlim(at)hotmail.com>
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Re: http://www.angelfire.com/biz/possibilities
1. The quality of the title image is not very attractive. You might
want to re-do the image with anti-alias turned on, if available on your
graphics program. I'd also recommend making the white color
transparent, or frame it, or drop a shadow, etc.
2. By using the attribute width="90%" in the <img> tag, you are
allowing the browser to adjust the image to fit the screen. Keep in
mind that some viewer would be using 1600 or higher resolution, and your
image would be expanded quite a bit. Make sure the image resolution is
good enough. Otherwise, the viewers might be able to count the pixels.
3. Link text is set to "#238E68". First of all, that color is hard to
read on the textured background. Secondly, that color is not a web safe
color. I'd recommend using a darker green.
4. The first "[" of the link list was not set to the same size and
color.
5. Be consistent when referring to you/your company. In Seeing is
Believing, you referred you/your company as "we've". In Prices &
Services, you mentioned "I am happy to assist.." In Possibilities'
Bookstore, you did that within the same paragraph (in the intro para).
6. The link to United With Christ is broken.
7. In Seeing is Believing, is the phrase "IN PROGRESS" apply to
Mlynarski & Cawley, or every thing under that phrase? Again, try to
group information clearer.
8. Be aware that by increasing the font size within a paragraph for a
few words would skew the consistency of the row height of the paragraph,
which makes it look irregular. See the paragraphs in Seeing and
Believing.
9. Regarding Prices & Services, I suggest grouping the price with the
description a little clearer. One might misread the price for 6 to 10
pages to be 500 dollars.
-Collin
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