Re: I need some feedback =)

I was aware of some of that stuff, just didn't know if others would 
notice.. I still haven't updated my resume cause the idea was to 
eliminate it completely, but maybe I'll just make a new image map on the 
frames version =) As far as the gifs, I wasn't sure whether I should 
sacrifice the quality of the images for speed, but I guess I should... I 
really appreciate your comments.. got them all printed out and I'm gonna 
tweak things a little bit =) LOTS of thanks!!!! =)))

-Nat


>Queen Dido wrote:
>> 
>> Well, I spent all of today (12/29) working on my personal site, which 
I
>> had kinda put aside for a while because of school, and I think it's 
time
>> for me to get some feedback other than my boyfriend (who will lie no
>> matter what ;). The site is http://www.ben2.ucla.edu/~nate. If I can 
get
>> some *constructive* criticism, I would really appreciate it =)
>> 
>> Thanks!! =)
>> 
>> -Nat
>
>Hi!
>
>6:15 am here (haven't slept, maybe I should ;-)), so my visit was kind
>of brief; but, here goes anyway.
>Viewed with Cx586-120, 28Mb, NN4.04, 33.6k, 800x600, 16bit. 
>
>Note: This is my first critique, so I hope I'm doing it right.  
>Note mk.II: everything below is IMHO.
>
>- I liked the boats! :-) Nice idea, although they did take a little
>while to download.
>- Pictures are nice, but they should be in .jpg format instead of 
.gif;they would be much smaller that way. 
>- Your dad's picture (frames) is flattened a bit; width should be set 
at
>245, and height, 349.  
>- In your music section (frames), the bottom frame seems superfluous;
>the logos could be placed in the upper frame, like you did in the
>no-frames version.
>- Maybe you should add a way to get back to the Welcome page in the
>"frames" menu.
>- Is there a way (frames) to go back to the Colosseum?
>- Is your resume available from the frames version?
>- Music page was slow; reducing the actual size of some logos would
>help, instead of just resizing them with WIDTH and HEIGHT.
>
>As for the content, most interesting. Your personal site certainly
>doesn't lack substance, which is a welcome relief from some pages with 
a
>lot of flash and little else. The fact that history is a subject that
>always fascinated me made me appreciate your page even more. All in 
all,
>I like your page; just needs a little tweaking.
>
>Hope this helps.
> 
>-- 
>Jean-Francois Pare
>parej(at)usa.net
>http://www.permanentbf.qc.ca/gruuk/
>ICQ - 5563904
>



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