Re: Critique - Stupid me...

1.  Loading is extremely slow, even with T1 connection.

2.  If you're really concern about visual impaired viewers, I would 
change the background/text color combination to something more legible.  
Notice that you are using blue as the link color.  Couldn't read your 
e-mail link.

3.  Extremely slow.  Did I mentioned that already?  I'm mentioning it 
again because after typing Item 2, your Unique Products page is still 
loading.  I just need something to do while waiting....

4.  Just an observation, your non-numerical attribute assignments are 
not bounded by double quotes (i.e. valign=middle).  I've always been 
told that it is a good practice to use double quote.  Don't know why.  
I'm guessing some browser might convert the ASCII representation of the 
word into numbers.  May be someone on this list can clarify.

5.  I like the way you implemented the mouseover effect.  Reversing the 
text is pretty original.  At least I've never seen it done before.

6.  You might want to put a <title> tag in the main page, where you 
defined the frames.  No title is showing on the top line of the browser.

7.  Typo in the Products page: "I wasn't aware off."  should be "of"

8.  Horizontal separator animation is too distracting.  Especially when 
all of them are going at the same time.  A little too much animation in 
general.

9.  The monster.gif animated image would look better if you make it 
transparent, or frame it.


Overall, it is a good site for a great cause.  Keep it up!


-Collin


----Original Message Follows----
Date: Tue, 30 Dec 1997 09:34:37 -0800
From: Remote <Remote(at)remote-ability.com>
Reply-To: Remote(at)remote-ability.com
To: " ." <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Subject: Critique - Stupid me...

Can't believe I did that...send the message to critique my site and no
url. (duh!) It's at http://remote-ability.com 

Thanks...

Mike



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