Re: New address/new look revisited
by "Queen Dido" <romanbtch(at)hotmail.com>
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Tue, 30 Dec 1997 20:47:10 PST |
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Hi =) I visited your pages, and found them both really nicely written.
There were only a few things that I think u might want to take a look
at:
P166, 28.8 bps, Netscape 3.01, 800x600
-On your newsletters page, the newsletters seemed a bit blurry. Try
antialiasing them to make them look sharper, or sharpening them a bit.
-Same on the advertising page.. also, they took a while to load (though
interlacing helped). See if you can make them into jpg format, and try
to sharpen them a bit more.
-The logo (Mark's Copy) is a bit jagged.. but that might have been done
on purpose (?).
The reason why I think you need aliased images is because that is
exactly what you're selling: your artwork. They look too jagged, too
"computer-like" and basically makes those pretty images lose a bit of
it. Other than that, i like your presentation and layout =)
-Nat
Feel free to visit
http://www.ben2.ucla.edu/~nate/
Happy Holidays!
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