Re: Critique pliiz (fast page)

Hi,

I looked at your page and, although it seems you tought a lot about the 
design.. it didn't really catch my eye. It seems like everything you 
designed looked "small," like too condensed. 

Also, why do you need two counters? You have the webtracker one, and 
then you have another one below it. I would keep the webtracker for 
statistical information, no need for the other one. Oh and.. you should 
erase that "click here for statistics" link.. make your audience want to 
know more about you guys through content than through sheer numbers =)

The >< around the text make it hard to read. Also, the fonts are a bit 
too small, and the lines are too "together." my eyes refuse to read it.

How about an explanation of what Frantic Crew is? It should *really* be 
in your main page, it's your way of telling people "Ok this is who we 
are and what to do. If you want to know more, click on these links." You 
know what I mean?


The link exchange will only draw people away from your page.. It doesn't 
look very catchy to begin with, you need to make a greater effort to 
make me want to click on those links. 

In general, the feeling I got was that I wasn't really welcome. Right 
now I still have no clue as to what Frantic Crew stands for, nor what 
the page is really about. Make the page a little more colorful, or just 
more um.... well attractive. All IMHO =)

Good luck =)

-Nat




Feel free to visit

http://www.ben2.ucla.edu/~nate/

Happy Holidays!


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