Re: Personal homepage critique

Hi, I'm looking at your site right now, and found a few things you might 
want to take a look at =)

The link to the "MacFury" games list gives a 404 error. Also, I would 
spell it on the page "MacFury" since "Macfury" made me think about it 
twice.. sounded  like "Mac Furry" heheheh =)

Also, see if you can put a <br> between that link and the previous one.. 
they are right next to each other. 

You have a typo.. Finish should be Finnish, as in the language =)

I would put that Top 1000 sites  link where you have other links... It 
would take people away from your page.. same with the link exchange 
(which doesn't really work). 

Now as far as the design of it.. it looks unfinished.. most people look 
at pages b/c of graphics and stuff, and your page is pretty plain. For 
one, I would make a name for the page, so that instead of "welcome to my 
homepage" you have something a lil more interesting.. even if it's 
something like "Welcome to D's place".. sounds better than "my 
homepage." 

Try playing around with maybe a side bar ... add more color to the 
page... a lil line on the side works wonders =)

Go to http://www.shareware.com/,and look for Paint Shop Pro. It will 
help you make more interesting graphics, like a background (or a side 
bar w/ white background), or buttons or some kind of image. 

All in all, I can't say there was a "wrong" thing with the page. It's 
well done, but it needs a bit of salsa, if you know what I mean. =)

-Nat

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