Re: http://www.geocities.com/heartland/2981/

Thomas:

- Graphics is very good.  I'd recommend adding a few images related to 
the type of business.

- Navigation buttons are very clear.  I don't think it's necessary to 
have a link to the Main from the main page.  On the navigation bar, you 
might want to highlight the corresponding button so viewers can easily 
tell which page they are in.

- Missing alt attributes from the <img> tags.  I'm suprised Microsoft 
Front Page doesn't make you include the alt attributes.  I guess that's 
another reason I like using Notepad.

Forgive me I'm wrong, as I understand, GeoCities only provide free site 
for non-commercial use.  Also, I think they require a link to GeoCities 
as well as a valid e-mail address posted on the main page which I don't 
see.

Regards.

-Collin


----Original Message Follows----
Date: Sun, 04 Jan 1998 04:40:17 +0100
To: hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
From: Thomas Ellingsen <jtelling(at)sn.no>
Subject: http://www.geocities.com/heartland/2981/

Hi people!

Please critique: http://www.geocities.com/heartland/2981/
I made this site for an English pub very cheap (moneywise). I tried not 
to
make it *look* cheap though, but I guess that's up to you. It's not big,
and it loads reasonably fast. No junk-gfx. This is the pub's homepage,
they're not trying to sell anything via the web at least.
On advance, thank you :)

Thomas




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