Re: Please critique russiantranslation.com

David:

Don't get discouraged by the attached critique.  I think your site is 
very well laid out.  There is nothing wrong with left justifying and 
limit to about 600 pixels.  Especially when it is a business site.  It 
looks very professional.  Clean graphics.  Good use of animated GIF.  
The paragraphs towards the bottom of the page can have a slightly 
smaller font though.  The single-pixel red line is not lining up very 
well.  It has two small breaks on my browser (NS4).

Sorry, I don't have time to view any sub-pages.  Keep up with the good 
work!

-Collin
collinlim(at)hotmail.com
http://members.xoom.com/collin/
http://members.xoom.com/gify/



>From: "gordon" <gordon69b(at)earthlink.net>
>To: <drwright(at)earthling.net>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
>Subject: Re: Please critique russiantranslation.com
>Date: Sat, 20 Jun 1998 11:21:46 -0700
>
>Hello David,
>
>Since you claim to be new to this, you'll know that this is not 
personal
><G>!  The site is typical of the drivel that businesses presents on the 
web.
>
>Every page is crunched up into the left portion of the page..very 
tacky.
>This forces me to scroll down when there isn't enough content on the 
page to
>really warrant such action.  Move the "Rainbow graphic" to the 
Translation
>page where it has relevance
>
>The background color has been set, but the text color remains at its
>default..a bad design practice.
>
>HTML is abused, as though it were a design specification rather than a
>structural markup tool, throughout this poorly described set of 
documents.
>Obtain a copy of the "HTML 4.0 specification" [ http://www.w3.org/ ] 
and
>have a look at "2. Introduction to HTML 4.0".
>
>later,
>gordon
>
>-----Original Message-----
>From: David Rolla Wright <dwrights(at)gte.net>
>To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
>Date: Saturday, June 20, 1998 10:12 AM
>Subject: Please critique russiantranslation.com
>
>
>>Hi all,
>>
>>Please critique http://www.russiantranslation.com, my first effort.
>>
>>It doesn't validate yet - most of the trouble seems to be in the
>>Javascript inserted by Fireworks.
>>
>>I appreciate your time,
>>
>>David Rolla Wright
>>
>>
>
>


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