Re: Please critique commercial site

by Luke Opperman <luko(at)rocketmail.com>

Date:	Thu, 3 Sep 1998 16:02:43 -0700 (PDT)
To:	thefuggimator(at)geocities.com, hwg-crit <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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RE: > http://intellement.hypermart.net

266 PC
56k
1200x1024
millions

The colors and layout seems pretty consistent, and goes
well together. only two comments about them. First, the
enter page menu is a little difficult to read because the
drop shadow is so close in color. darken the text a bit or
get rid of the shadow.

Second, the text on most of the pages is a little
light/small. 

THe big problem i had was with the entrance and
navigation. Two pages before we get to the main menu, and
on each page the circle takes you back to the first splash
page! i expeted it to go to the menu. It was also unclear
where the arrows would go. perhaps text links instead of
arrows would help.

Luke

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