Re: What do you think?

by Luke Opperman <luko(at)rocketmail.com>

Date:	Sun, 18 Oct 1998 11:14:58 -0700 (PDT)
To:	"W. Scott Smith" <wahikan(at)pipeline.com>, hwg-crit <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
	todo: View Thread, Original

RE: http://wahikan.home.pipeline.com/

Overall i like it. The colors are strong, but not
overpowering.

Things that bother me:

The skull and crossbones. huh? kid safe, etc. What purpose
does this image serve?

The titles of the sites on the red is a little hard to
read. I would expect them to be stronger than all the text
around them. Also, once again seriously consider the lack
of underlining.

The main paragraph could use some rewording in my mind.
the right idea is there, but it is kinda wierdly stated.
(IMHO)

Finally, I think having a poll is great, but perhaps
consider a poll with a little more relevance to the site. 

There you go,

Luke

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