Re: Please critique http://www.hudnet.com/bbbs/index.html

by Luke Opperman <luko(at)rocketmail.com>

Date:	Sun, 18 Oct 1998 11:41:00 -0700 (PDT)
To:	Eric Hudson <Eric(at)hudnet.com>, hwg-crit <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
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RE: http://www.hudnet.com/bbbs/index.html

first impressions: nice clean, text is simple, however
there is a lot of straight text on the page. At least
break it up with headers.

only other thing that came to mind right now: the
organization name does not really stand out, perhaps
bigger or change the font or make it italic or something
to diferentiate it from the rest of the same style text.

Good luck,

Luke

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