Re: Flash/Shockwave page review
by Luke Opperman <luko(at)rocketmail.com>
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Thu, 19 Nov 1998 17:03:47 -0800 (PST) |
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Diane Welch <diane(at)wonderwebdesigns.com>, hwg-crit <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org> |
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I like it, the explanations of what you will find under
each button is nice. Perhaps you could get a little more
specific on the "meet your internet needs" section, expand
that a little bit. I see you got the blue background fixed
on the real version of this page (i must be a little late
answering this :)
Anyways, very nice. perhaps a little lacking in difference
between the two colors (well, no. but it seems kinda bland
somehow. needs something a little more exciting.)
Luke
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- ( luke opperman ) -
Spigot Graphics, Cohesive Design for the Web
- ( http://spigot.hypermart.net/ ) -
-- ..some tiny cows, two brushstrokes each,
but confidently cows.. - 'Poem' by Elizabeth Bishop
---Diane Welch <diane(at)wonderwebdesigns.com> wrote:
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> Hello, all:
>
> I've done an alternate core page for my professional
website using
> Shockwave/Flash. (There's still a non-Shockwave site.)
It's just the one
> page so far -- none of the buttons are working, yet. But
I would really
> appreciate your reactions to it.
>
> http://www.wonderwebdesigns.com/flash_home.html
>
> TIA.
>
> Diane Welch
> Wonderweb Designs
> http://www.wonderwebdesigns.com/
> diane(at)wonderwebdesigns.com
>
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