Re: Please critique my first professional attempt.

Netscape, millions of colors, Power Mac

Well designed, quick to load, and nice graphics.

On the Association Memberships page I recieved a JavaScript Error:
JavaScript Error: http://www.pagekansas.com/associations.htm, line 28:

syntax error.

 target=
.......^

Also, you might want to consider using the smaller logo for all of the 
pages except for the main one (you use the large logo for the Paging and 
Wordservice pages).

The site is well done, although I have a general complaint against all 
sites that require 800X600 resolution (as my screen at home isn't large 
enough to see the whole thing, and I, like many surfers hate to scroll 
too much.)

Good job,
S. Red



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