Re: please check

by Luke Opperman <luko(at)rocketmail.com>

Date:	Sat, 2 Jan 1999 14:02:50 -0800 (PST)
To:	Magickk <shanee(at)cloudnet.com>, hwg-crit <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
	todo: View Thread, Original

Hi-

Once it was all loaded the colors actually looked pretty
good together, if rather typical of geocities-type
personal pages. Here are my suggestions towards improving
it. Anything I don't mention you can assume I liked or
didn't mind, if you want :)

1. Move the pictures that link to the rest of the site to
right below the title, rather than having the counter and
"we rated" logos be first. put them at the end.

2. Add a bgcolor to the body tag. Until the background
image loads people will see your page with a default
background color, usually white. if you put a darker color
as the bgcolor at least the text will be readable all the
time.

3. You might consider adding a description or synopsis of
what each area contains. This could either be under each
image, or you could change the layout so there is one
image per line with an introduction next to it. This is
just a suggestion, it is fine how it is.

4. Everytime I came to the main page I got a warning that
Netscape would open Notepad to view something on this
page. I also never got your javascript alert to come up.
Something to look into...

That's all, I was using NN4.5, 1280x1024 millions of
colors, 56K, win95.

Luke

===

                - ( luke opperman ) -
     Spigot Graphics, Cohesive Design for the Web
          - ( http://spigot.hypermart.net/ ) -  

-- ..some tiny cows, two brushstrokes each,
       but confidently cows.. - 'Poem' by Elizabeth Bishop

---Magickk <shanee(at)cloudnet.com> wrote:
>
> Please check http://www.cloudnet.com/~shanee.
> 
> 
> Thanx,
> 
> Magickk
> 
> 
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<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD W3 HTML//EN">
<HTML>
<HEAD>

<META content=text/html;charset=iso-8859-1
http-equiv=Content-Type>
<META content='"MSHTML 4.72.3510.1400"' name=GENERATOR>
</HEAD>
<BODY bgColor=#ffffff>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2>Please check <A 
href="http://www.cloudnet.com/~shanee">http://www.cloudnet.com/~shanee</A>.</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2></FONT>�</DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2></FONT>�</DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2>Thanx,</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2></FONT>�</DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2>Magickk</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#000000 size=2></FONT>�</DIV></BODY></HTML>

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