Re: [Lightship site critique]

After visiting the site, two suggestions.  One, the mouseover would be co=
ol. =

What would be cooler is if you used Flash.  It would speed the service be=
cuase
the overall file sizes would be smaller, and once loaded, the animation w=
ould
be a lot smoother than plain JS.

I liked the design of the secondary page as well.

Eric Webb

owner-hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org wrote:
> Hi all,

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> I'd like your opinions on a design I'm doing for my company's lightship=
=2E

> This won't take long, 'cos all I have so far are a home page -

> http://www.mtn.co.za/garf/ - and sample second-level page -

> http://www.mtn.co.za/garf/next.html

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> I was thinking of livening up the navigation a little, by adding a simp=
le

> mouseover effect (changing either the smaller images or the large centr=
al

> one), but I will first have to chop the home page image into smaller

> pieces.

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> Please note

> - none of the links work

> - I'm still looking for a suitable image for the "win a trip" button

> =


> The site will be linked from http://www.mtn.co.za/ and so there must so=
me

> (but not  much) visual continuity between the two.

> =


> All constructive criticism appreciated!

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> Lynnsey

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> The mind of the bigot is like the pupil of the eye; the more light you

> pour upon it, the more it will contract. -- Oliver Wendell Holmes



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