Re: please critique www.remedi.org

Re: http://www.remedi.org

I don't speak/read Dutch, so I'm just commenting on the
look of the site.

I agree with Killian, it does seem busy. I think the
reason for this is that nothing appears more important
than anything else. You need to lead the visitors eye,
give them the most important thing as the most visually
noticeable thing. I would suggest putting the text within
smaller margins, to add some white space. Consider putting
a larger title at the top of the page. I think having all
the section titles start with the same bullet is kind of
repetitive, either scrap the bullet image or make it
significant. My personal suggestion would be to have that
be a larger logo alongside a larger title at the top, and
then not have it at each sub-section.

Good luck,

Luke

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          - ( http://spigot.hypermart.net/ ) -  

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       but confidently cows.. - 'Poem' by Elizabeth Bishop




---"Frank W.M. Steeman" <frank(at)steeman.nl.com> wrote:
>
> Hi list,
> 
> Can you please do me a favour and critique 
> <a href="">http://www.remedi.org</a>
> It is going to be pblished soon.
> 
> (The contents is in the dutch language)
> 
> Thanks,
> Frank Steeman
> WebSter
> Leiderdorp
> 
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