Re: Critique Please

-First impression - Kinda dull.. boxy.. looks like you just threw some
boxes on a form with a background with no ryme or reason.
-Don't ever put a smiley face in a buisness page unless it's part of a
trademark or logo..."Dave Hofer - Executive of Entertainment : )"
-A business shouldn't tell people they can "usually" get back to you
in 24 hours...
-overall i think if i were you i'd copy and paste all the text to a
file and redesign the whole site.. it needs more than you give it
 
thats just what i would do tho  =)   (don't take anything i've said
bad.. i've redone my site 4 times in the last 2 weeks.. few more weeks
you guys can get me back   <g>)

rbrooks

<this is not an ot letter, but under this part is ot so if you don't
wanna read it, then don't - i constructively threw it here so i do not
repeat my actions>

I would like to apologize to anyone who was bothered by my one RE to
an off topic letter... well apologize, that is to everyone who did not
write me about it.  For those who had to write me considering the
position i was in, get a life and a real people job... that way you
can use your time a lil better.  =)



---Jayne <Jayne(at)laloma.com> wrote:
>
> Hi All--
> I just did a revamp on my commercial site. Comments and suggestions
> appreciated.
>  
> http://www.skyline-design.com
> 
> Thanks - Jayne
> 


==
If you go flying back through time, and you see somebody else flying forward into the future, it's probably best to avoid eye contact.

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