Re: Please critique my site

by "Susan Daniels" <susandaniels(at)hotmail.com>

Date:	Thu, 04 Feb 1999 07:41:58 PST
To:	webmaster(at)mwwebdesign.com, hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
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>http://www.mwwebdesign.com 

OK, I'm putting on my English student hat:

"I know what your thinking not another web designer! Anybody can design 
and build a Web page these days right?"

Should be:

"I know what you're thinking:  Not another web designer! Anybody can 
design and build a Web page these days, right?"

Although, overall, the copy on your first page is rather amateurish. THe 
page layout is fine (17" monitor, 1024x768, 32bit color, win95), font is 
fine.

DHTML demo works fine. (IE5.0b).

Guestbook and Reciprocal Links: the menu goes away. I have to use the 
back button to go anywhere else but home. and when I click on the home 
button, I apparently go to a page for a different browser, because the 
fonts are smaller.

Gotta tell you, nothing here makes you stand out as a web designer. I've 
seen everything before. I would keep looking...

That's all for now. Good luck.
--Susan

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