Re: working with frames

>http://members.xoom.com/divinyliz/

Liz,

There's a problem with your Jewel quote. It looks like:

"I w o n ' t
be made 
useless, I won't 
beIdle
wi th 
despair"
jewel 

(I removed the blank lines in between each line of text, but left the 
intra word spaces in)

I see you actually have it typed in this way in your code. I assume you 
didn't want that, so you must be using WYSIWYG--frontpage? Go fix it by 
handcoding.

More...
The front page has a nice look. Personally, I would give it a little 
more white space above the main table box. Even for 800x600.

Inside...
I understand the effect you were going for, but the text is way too 
small to read.

The active link text is (almost?) the same color as your background. So 
when I click on a menu item, that menu item seems to disappear. Unless I 
specifically click away, within the same frame.

Favorites: "would you eat chocolate cover insects" should be "covered"

I know that's a lot of "bad" stuff, but other than the text size, it's 
pretty small stuff. I do think you have an interesting homepage, and I 
enjoyed clicking around in it

--Susan

The main frame has horizontal scrolling. So I can never let go of the 
mouse while trying to read the text.

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