Re: any advice?

I suppose anything is fine for a homepage if you aren't out to impress
anyone, but from a mild design point of view here's what I see

-I don't understand why you have a link on the "enter" page for a
"disclaimer" and then there it is again when I enter.  Even though
it's not, if it was a "disclaimer" it should be read before entering.
-Which brings me to suggest you trash the first page and just start
off with your "index2"
-Once in, it's way too empty.  If you don't have any content on the
first page, try not to make people scroll down so far just to read
more links.  Think of a clever way to present where you want your
viewer to go.
-Just a suggestion.. maybe try to put anything that leads away from
your site in one place- even for a home page you sure offer a lot of
ways out.
-Dunno how much i like every single word in that whole page centered
-Make "http://www.velvet.net/~kelly/buffalo.html" more obvious as to
what it is.. that seems to be the one place where someone who does not
know you personally.

anywayyy thats all just first impression.. if you want me to go deeper
just ask..

==
"Life is a well of joy; but where the rabble drinks too, all wells are poisoned.
"I am fond of all that is clean, but I have no wish to see the grinning snouts and thurst of the unclean. They cast their eye into the well: now their revolting smile shines up out of the well. They have poisoned the holy water with their lustfulness and when they call their dirty dreams pleasure they poison the language too."
                             - Fredrick Nietzsche



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